Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 22 1 Oct 202114 Dec 2021 After my first draft I felt that The Storm needed a more fleshed out body, with more obstacles to exhaust both the characters and the reader. I therefore added a…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 21 24 Sep 202114 Dec 2021 Well, I'm nearly halfway through the latest draft of The Storm. That surprises me, I feel like the plot is more than halfway through, apparently I spent longer with the…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 20 17 Sep 202114 Dec 2021 I'm coming into the real meat of the story now, the long journey back to shore. As always, here is a link to the second draft of this story, and…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 19 10 Sep 202115 Apr 2022 I've reached the second act of this revision to The Storm. So far things have been a lot smoother than the first time I read through it, and honestly that's…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 18 3 Sep 202114 Dec 2021 So far things have been getting along pretty smoothly. I still like a lot what I've written, with just a bit of tidy-up here and there. Now, though, I'm coming…
Improving Technique Update on My Novel: Month 28 1 Sep 202130 Dec 2021 AUGUST STATS Days Writing: 17 New Words: 2,966 New Chapters: 0.5 Total Word-count: 85,250 Total Chapters: 23 My goal for the past few check-ins has been to incrementally improve on…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 17 27 Aug 202131 Dec 2021 I got off to a good start with last week's edit, which officially brought me into my third draft of The Storm. You can compare my new text with the…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 16 20 Aug 202131 Dec 2021 Last week I shared the second draft of my story, so that it would all be in one, tidy place for future reference. Today I'll start revising it, and I…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 15 13 Aug 202131 Dec 2021 Last week I finished my second draft of the story. Now I need to read through the whole thing again, correcting awkward phrases and grammatical errors, correcting structural problems, and…