Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 18 3 Sep 202114 Dec 2021 So far things have been getting along pretty smoothly. I still like a lot what I've written, with just a bit of tidy-up here and there. Now, though, I'm coming…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 17 27 Aug 202131 Dec 2021 I got off to a good start with last week's edit, which officially brought me into my third draft of The Storm. You can compare my new text with the…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 16 20 Aug 202131 Dec 2021 Last week I shared the second draft of my story, so that it would all be in one, tidy place for future reference. Today I'll start revising it, and I…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 15 13 Aug 202131 Dec 2021 Last week I finished my second draft of the story. Now I need to read through the whole thing again, correcting awkward phrases and grammatical errors, correcting structural problems, and…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 14 6 Aug 202131 Dec 2021 Last week I made it to the point where Oscar finally sees Sam's lighthouse shining in the distance. Now comes the journey back to shore, and I find myself divided…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 13 30 Jul 202130 Dec 2021 I left the rewrite in quite a dramatic place last time. Harry was finally moved to point of confession, and had just made it known that he was directly responsible…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 12 23 Jul 202130 Dec 2021 Today I'm looking to transition from my new material into the original story, connecting at the point of Harry's confession to Oscar. From there I expect to follow the same…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 11 16 Jul 202130 Dec 2021 Increasing Danger) Oscar spun the wheel to the left, coming thirty degrees from perpendicular to the waves. The next crest rolled into them and there was the unsettling sensation of…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 10 9 Jul 202130 Dec 2021 Tipping Over) "Oscar!" Harry's voice broke through the howling wind, his hand pointed fearfully ahead. Oscar turned around just in time to see his vessel sliding up the ramp of…
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