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Improving Technique

Revising The Storm- Week 34

31 Dec 20217 Jan 2022
Only a few weeks until I'm done with this, the fourth draft of The Storm. I'm now coming into the climax of the story, which I've generally considered to be…
Improving Technique

Revising The Storm- Week 23

8 Oct 202114 Dec 2021
Not quite to the final act of the story, but getting very near. Today's effort ought to bring us to the moment just before the story's climax, and then we'll…
Lessons

Throw Me Another Ball!

29 Mar 202128 Dec 2021
A Mass of Faces) It was once a selling point for movies to show a huge mass of people on camera at the same time. Epics like The Ten Commandments…
Short Stories

The Soldier’s Last Sleep: Part Three

6 Feb 202027 Nov 2021
Some of the mortars fell directly on the trench, and some of them landed a bit before it, right in the midst of the enemy forces. All was chaotic disarray!…

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