Short Stories The Salt Worms: Part Five 29 Sep 202130 Dec 2021 A silence fell over the room, but it was finally broken as the man next to Nathan spoke up. "Yes, there are some definite concerns," he said to Samuel Iverson,…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 21 24 Sep 202114 Dec 2021 Well, I'm nearly halfway through the latest draft of The Storm. That surprises me, I feel like the plot is more than halfway through, apparently I spent longer with the…
Short Stories The Salt Worms: Part Four 22 Sep 202130 Dec 2021 Nathan had known that day was coming long before it occurred. Everyone did. Every other week some general or senator would show up, claiming to be the voice of the…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 17 27 Aug 202131 Dec 2021 I got off to a good start with last week's edit, which officially brought me into my third draft of The Storm. You can compare my new text with the…
Short Stories Covalent: Part Fourteen 4 Aug 202131 Dec 2021 Cace couldn't tell whether she was alive or not. Her face was still submerged in the water, so it wasn't possible that she was breathing, but was she being sustained…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 13 30 Jul 202130 Dec 2021 I left the rewrite in quite a dramatic place last time. Harry was finally moved to point of confession, and had just made it known that he was directly responsible…
Short Stories Covalent: Part Thirteen 28 Jul 202131 Dec 2021 Cace shivered all over, then slowly rose to his feet. Earlier that day he had stood with a foot in both the overworld and the Ether, not seeing either in…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 12 23 Jul 202130 Dec 2021 Today I'm looking to transition from my new material into the original story, connecting at the point of Harry's confession to Oscar. From there I expect to follow the same…
Short Stories Covalent: Part Twelve 21 Jul 202131 Dec 2021 "Please no!" Aylme moaned, but as she looked up to where the sling scraped over the bough she could see that the fibers of fabric were peeling apart more and…
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