Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 21 24 Sep 202114 Dec 2021 Well, I'm nearly halfway through the latest draft of The Storm. That surprises me, I feel like the plot is more than halfway through, apparently I spent longer with the…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 20 17 Sep 202114 Dec 2021 I'm coming into the real meat of the story now, the long journey back to shore. As always, here is a link to the second draft of this story, and…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 19 10 Sep 202115 Apr 2022 I've reached the second act of this revision to The Storm. So far things have been a lot smoother than the first time I read through it, and honestly that's…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 18 3 Sep 202114 Dec 2021 So far things have been getting along pretty smoothly. I still like a lot what I've written, with just a bit of tidy-up here and there. Now, though, I'm coming…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 17 27 Aug 202131 Dec 2021 I got off to a good start with last week's edit, which officially brought me into my third draft of The Storm. You can compare my new text with the…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 16 20 Aug 202131 Dec 2021 Last week I shared the second draft of my story, so that it would all be in one, tidy place for future reference. Today I'll start revising it, and I…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 15 13 Aug 202131 Dec 2021 Last week I finished my second draft of the story. Now I need to read through the whole thing again, correcting awkward phrases and grammatical errors, correcting structural problems, and…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 14 6 Aug 202131 Dec 2021 Last week I made it to the point where Oscar finally sees Sam's lighthouse shining in the distance. Now comes the journey back to shore, and I find myself divided…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 13 30 Jul 202130 Dec 2021 I left the rewrite in quite a dramatic place last time. Harry was finally moved to point of confession, and had just made it known that he was directly responsible…
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