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Update on My Novel #37

It’s been a while since I have posted, just over three months to be exact, and as one might imagine,…

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Revising The Storm #48

Two weeks ago, I gave an update on my novel, after which I shifted to doing some work on my…

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Update on My Novel #36

Two-and-a-half weeks ago I stated that I was scaling down this blog and giving my attention to my novel and…

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That’s So Inciting!

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Coming to a Decision) I ended the last chapter of Covalent with the main character coming to an important decision. Previously Cace had been scolded by Aylme for his visits…
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Revising The Storm- Week 3

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I have finished reviewing The Storm and have made note of the changes it requires. Now I will go through it piece-by-piece, correcting things as I go. I won't take…
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Covalent: Part Three

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"Rolar!" Aylme shrieked as she reached down and shook the boy. Some of the dark powder slid off his tunic and he gave a small moan, but his eyes remain…
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Bits of Thread

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Keeping Secrets) Last Wednesday I integrated world-building into my latest story in a subtle way. It began with the boy, Cace, being angry at the girl, Aylme. Cace is trying…
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Revising The Storm- Week 2

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I'm continuing to review my short story The Storm, making note of all the areas I wish to improve on as I go. There is a line I just came…
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Covalent: Part Two

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Cace shivered hard. "What? What happened?" he panted deliriously. "It's alright, Cace," Aylme rested her soft palm against his temple. "It's alright now." "But I--but--" realization finally sunk in. "You…
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How Many Characters?

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Very Limited Scopes) I've always been interested in movies with a limited cast of characters. Take, for example, the 2013 film Locke, starring Tom Hardy. The entire film takes place…
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Revising The Storm- Week 1

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Here we are at the first post of my new series: The Editor's Bench! Here I will select one of my short stories and take it from its first draft…
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Covalent: Part One

5 May 202130 Dec 2021
Not much. Not much at all. Just a little bit of gray tinged with light blues and yellows at the periphery. A small sense of swirling motions, too, like trace…

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