Skip to content

Give Me Pen and Paper

Search
  • Home
  • About
  • Stories
    • 2018
      • The Wedding Scenes
      • To the Great Infinite
      • Imposed Will
      • Phillip the Mouse
      • Free Cleaning Service
      • Sculpting Light
      • Deep Forest
      • Tico the Jester
      • Celestials
      • Revelate
      • The Wolf in the Room
      • In Stars and Stones
      • The Basketball in the Water
      • Revenger of Blood
      • The Noble
      • The Last Grasshopper
      • Cursed
      • A Minute at a Time
      • Gifts from Daniel Bronn…and Jerry
    • 2019
      • With the Beast
      • The Heart of Something Wild
      • Glimmer
      • Phisherman
      • The Sweet Bay Tree
      • Three Variations on a Theme
      • Network Down
      • Washed Ashore
      • Power Suit Racing
      • The Storm
      • The Anther-Child
      • Harold and Caroline
      • I Hated You, Jimmy
      • Does What He Must
      • The Death of Simon Bowie
      • Instructions Not Included
      • Cael: Darkness and Light
      • Once Among the Clouds
      • Hello, World
      • Shade
      • The Last Duty
      • The Toymaker
    • 2020
      • It’s Tough to Be a God
      • The Soldier’s Last Sleep
      • The Cruelty of King Bal’Tath
      • Washed Down the River
      • Slow and Easy, Then Sudden
      • Raise the Black Sun
      • Boat of Three
      • The Changed Dog
      • The Favored Son
    • 2021
      • The Favored Son: Alternate
      • The Time Travel Situation
      • The Punctured Football
      • Covalent
      • Secrets in the Mountain
      • The Salt Worms
    • 2022
      • The Long Walk to Alquoran
      • A Talk in a Car
      • Hunt of the Others
      • The Late Letter
      • The Tangible Dark

Tag: editing

Improving Technique

Revising The Storm- Week 46

22 Apr 202229 Apr 2022
I've been writing even more new material than I expected in this revision of the story's middle act. Even scenes that I recycled from before have had their context considerably…
Improving Technique

Revising The Storm- Week 45

15 Apr 202222 Apr 2022
Today I'm looking to finish the first major segment of the middle act. This segment has been quite a bit longer than I'd anticipated. If the second and third are…
Improving Technique

Revising The Storm- Week 44

8 Apr 202215 Apr 2022
In my last entry we left things at the height of chaos. It was also all-new material, which was very pleasant to get to write after having repeated the same…
Improving Technique

Revising The Storm- Week 43

25 Mar 20221 Apr 2022
Last week I finished the first segment of the second act, in which we saw Oscar and Harry venture against the waves and ready themselves to push against the eddies.…
Improving Technique

Revising The Storm- Week 42

18 Mar 202225 Mar 2022
Last week I got started rewriting the middle section of The Storm, which I will be continuing with today. As a reminder, this is the outline of the segment I…
Improving Technique

Revising The Storm- Week 41

11 Mar 202217 Mar 2022
Two weeks ago I made an in-depth outline for the middle act of The Storm. About half of its sequences are going to be recycled from previous work, and half…
Improving Technique

Revising The Storm- Week 40

25 Feb 20224 Mar 2022
Last week I put together a plan for reworking the middle act of The Storm. I decided to divide it into a miniature three act structure, where it alternates between…
Improving Technique

Revising The Storm- Week 39

18 Feb 202225 Feb 2022
Last week I shared my insights from reading through my fourth draft. The main takeaway was that my middle act is struggling more than any other. Things just sort of…
Improving Technique

Revising The Storm- Week 38

11 Feb 202218 Feb 2022
Last week I posted the entirety of my fourth draft for The Storm. Since that time, I have gone through the draft, marking obvious changes and getting a feel for…

Posts navigation

Older posts

Categories

  • Improving Technique (94)
  • Lessons (210)
  • Short Stories (206)

Top Posts & Pages

  • The Favored Son: Alternate- Part Three
    The Favored Son: Alternate- Part Three
  • Children. Conflict. Play.
    Children. Conflict. Play.
  • Oh, Go Be Bored!
    Oh, Go Be Bored!
  • Not Too Much, Not Too Little, Just Right
    Not Too Much, Not Too Little, Just Right
  • Let Me Explain This to You
    Let Me Explain This to You
  • Update on My Novel: Month 33
    Update on My Novel: Month 33
  • With the Beast
    With the Beast
  • The Time Travel Situation: Part One
    The Time Travel Situation: Part One
  • The Time Travel Situation: Part Six
    The Time Travel Situation: Part Six
  • Raise the Black Sun: Part Nine
    Raise the Black Sun: Part Nine
Follow Give Me Pen and Paper on WordPress.com

Donations:

One-Time
Monthly
Yearly

Make a one-time donation

Make a monthly donation

Make a yearly donation

Choose an amount

$5.00
$15.00
$100.00
$5.00
$15.00
$100.00
$5.00
$15.00
$100.00

Or enter a custom amount

$

Your contribution is appreciated.

Your contribution is appreciated.

Your contribution is appreciated.

DonateDonate monthlyDonate yearly

Questions & Requests:

Create a website or blog at WordPress.com
  • Follow Following
    • Give Me Pen and Paper
    • Join 368 other followers
    • Already have a WordPress.com account? Log in now.
    • Give Me Pen and Paper
    • Customize
    • Follow Following
    • Sign up
    • Log in
    • Report this content
    • View site in Reader
    • Manage subscriptions
    • Collapse this bar
 

Loading Comments...