Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 46 22 Apr 202229 Apr 2022 I've been writing even more new material than I expected in this revision of the story's middle act. Even scenes that I recycled from before have had their context considerably…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 45 15 Apr 202222 Apr 2022 Today I'm looking to finish the first major segment of the middle act. This segment has been quite a bit longer than I'd anticipated. If the second and third are…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 44 8 Apr 202215 Apr 2022 In my last entry we left things at the height of chaos. It was also all-new material, which was very pleasant to get to write after having repeated the same…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 43 25 Mar 20221 Apr 2022 Last week I finished the first segment of the second act, in which we saw Oscar and Harry venture against the waves and ready themselves to push against the eddies.…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 42 18 Mar 202225 Mar 2022 Last week I got started rewriting the middle section of The Storm, which I will be continuing with today. As a reminder, this is the outline of the segment I…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 41 11 Mar 202217 Mar 2022 Two weeks ago I made an in-depth outline for the middle act of The Storm. About half of its sequences are going to be recycled from previous work, and half…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 40 25 Feb 20224 Mar 2022 Last week I put together a plan for reworking the middle act of The Storm. I decided to divide it into a miniature three act structure, where it alternates between…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 39 18 Feb 202225 Feb 2022 Last week I shared my insights from reading through my fourth draft. The main takeaway was that my middle act is struggling more than any other. Things just sort of…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 38 11 Feb 202218 Feb 2022 Last week I posted the entirety of my fourth draft for The Storm. Since that time, I have gone through the draft, marking obvious changes and getting a feel for…