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Improving Technique

Revising The Storm- Week 17

27 Aug 202131 Dec 2021
I got off to a good start with last week's edit, which officially brought me into my third draft of The Storm. You can compare my new text with the…
Improving Technique

Revising The Storm- Week 16

20 Aug 202131 Dec 2021
Last week I shared the second draft of my story, so that it would all be in one, tidy place for future reference. Today I'll start revising it, and I…
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The Storm: Part One

30 May 201917 Nov 2021
Oscar regarded the mounting storm behind him, then turned his attention back to the docks ahead. He was less than a quarter-mile out, and he'd be moored and warming his…
Short Stories

The Noble: Part Two

22 Nov 201812 Nov 2021
A grave somberness lay heavy on the air, and time itself seemed to freeze until the slaves were drawn out of their reverie by the sound of Lenny riding back…

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