Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 17 27 Aug 202131 Dec 2021 I got off to a good start with last week's edit, which officially brought me into my third draft of The Storm. You can compare my new text with the…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 16 20 Aug 202131 Dec 2021 Last week I shared the second draft of my story, so that it would all be in one, tidy place for future reference. Today I'll start revising it, and I…
Short Stories The Storm: Part One 30 May 201917 Nov 2021 Oscar regarded the mounting storm behind him, then turned his attention back to the docks ahead. He was less than a quarter-mile out, and he'd be moored and warming his…
Short Stories The Noble: Part Two 22 Nov 201812 Nov 2021 A grave somberness lay heavy on the air, and time itself seemed to freeze until the slaves were drawn out of their reverie by the sound of Lenny riding back…