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Update on My Novel #37

It’s been a while since I have posted, just over three months to be exact, and as one might imagine,…

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Revising The Storm #48

Two weeks ago, I gave an update on my novel, after which I shifted to doing some work on my…

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Update on My Novel #36

Two-and-a-half weeks ago I stated that I was scaling down this blog and giving my attention to my novel and…

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Do Reasons Even Matter?

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The Ends Justify the Means) The 1960 film The Magnificent Seven opens on a town being taken advantage of by Calvera, the head of a notorious gang of bandits. Calvera…
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Last week I put together a plan for reworking the middle act of The Storm. I decided to divide it into a miniature three act structure, where it alternates between…
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Hunt of the Others: Part Two

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"Good," Perry approved. "Bring it right here between my hands." O'Reilly pressed the nozzle through the rectangle of light. "Here?" "Little to the left. Little more. There." She started pulling…
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The Hidden Features

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Big and Small) A couple months ago I saw the new Dune movie based on the novels by Frank Herbert. I had heard of the Dune stories before, but this…
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Last week I shared my insights from reading through my fourth draft. The main takeaway was that my middle act is struggling more than any other. Things just sort of…
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Hunt of the Others: Part One

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It was a cold yet bright morning as the hunters assembled themselves on the banks of the Ori-Haq-Wi River. "Take a survey," Perry, the leader of their group command. Four…
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Let Them Make Their Own Choices

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Decisions, Decisions) A piece of advice commonly given to new parents is that at some point their child has to make their own decisions, even when those decisions are to…
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Revising The Storm- Week 38

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Last week I posted the entirety of my fourth draft for The Storm. Since that time, I have gone through the draft, marking obvious changes and getting a feel for…
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A Talk in a Car: Part Two

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"What do you want from me, Ed?" Burt asked miserably. "How am I supposed to face that here and now?" "Settle in," Ed commanded, and he reached to the side…

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