Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 23 8 Oct 202114 Dec 2021 Not quite to the final act of the story, but getting very near. Today's effort ought to bring us to the moment just before the story's climax, and then we'll…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 10 9 Jul 202130 Dec 2021 Tipping Over) "Oscar!" Harry's voice broke through the howling wind, his hand pointed fearfully ahead. Oscar turned around just in time to see his vessel sliding up the ramp of…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 9 2 Jul 202130 Dec 2021 I haven't quite finished with Oscar's struggle against the waves, and after that I'm going to throw in a few more challenges before Harry gives his confession. I don't just…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 6 11 Jun 202130 Dec 2021 In the heart of the storm and in the heart of the story! We're right at the middle of my tale, where the protagonist is about to face his great…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 4 28 May 202130 Dec 2021 Here we go, continuing with the edit of my short story The Storm. So far, I have made it through the introduction, and now will work on Oscar's journey to…
Improving Technique Revising The Storm- Week 3 21 May 202130 Dec 2021 I have finished reviewing The Storm and have made note of the changes it requires. Now I will go through it piece-by-piece, correcting things as I go. I won't take…
Short Stories Boat of Three: Part Three 6 Aug 202014 Dec 2021 And so began the long tedium. Each man took his rest, the others continued rowing during the interim, and then all progressed forward as quickly as they could. Though each…
Short Stories Boat of Three: Part Two 30 Jul 202014 Dec 2021 Julian shook his head firmly. "I don't trust him, Captain. I don't trust this man at all!" "No, I don't trust him, either," Captain Molley sighed. "But frankly, that doesn't…
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